“All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.”~ Edgar Allen Poe
19,148 words thus far in Death and I, the story of Mairin, Bruce, and Death.
This weekend I wrote three found poems with snippets of the NY Times again. I had a great helper too. Macavity laid on the snippets and moved several which ended up being just what I needed. I used pieces of the different poems in my story with Mairin, too, so my cutting the newspaper became an exercise in creative thinking.
Phantom Threat
A family portrait for all humanity
blood, sweat, toil, and tears
unraveling racial hatred
prompts crisis
in the darkest hours
of rivers and rituals
Happiness is for other people
those who stay
the once mediocre
seek some calm
apologize again
for them, it’s not discrimination
but
A war of words underway
The screaming just won’t stop
until
we seek our way to death.
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An enlightened friendship
when coffee brews a different spirit
in all its realness
speaks
Sweetness with a side of sarcasm.
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The metamorphosis
is an unwanted
brutal final indignity.
It penalizes what we had
in the
years of relying on what
no one knows.
The dots to greatness
remain unknown.
Yup, he had a good idea. The coffee poem and the metamorphosis both improved with his help.
All good but I’m in love with the coffee poem. Nice work at nano too!
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That’s my favorite too. Macavity in the picture stole the line with 3 sugars and he was so right, it didn’t need to be there. Thank you.
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“Macavity laid on the snippets and moved several which ended up being just what I needed. ” – loved this! And the visual of Macavity was perfect to go along with. How great that you did your composing in 3-D with 2-D elements (cut-out newspaper segments) and that you used found poetry! Yay!
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Macavity and I make a great writing team.
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Snippets are intriguing… my recent experiments using 60s underground newspapers are, well, addictive (in the best way)
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